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I fell in love in a red Toyota truck
And fell back out in a blue Explorer

Graduation brought us together
But Thanksgiving broke us apart

I kissed your twin brother, but
You just kissed me later

The affection of a lonely heart
Can be stretched only so far

It was easy enough to traverse
The three hundred miles

But the distance between us
Was greater than that

I fell in love in a little red truck
And fell back out in a blue Explorer
©2006-2010 ~friskyryski
:iconfriskyryski:

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Old idea. I got sick of it sitting in my unfinished folder.

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:iconwaata:
I went through your gallery, and found this.

A gem, relatively unearthed to treasure.

You're a really good poet yaknow.
:iconfriskyryski:
Thank you! I really appreciate you going through my gallery. Best wishes!

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Rykki
:icondixie26:
This is a beautiful piece, and I know what you mean w/ the unfinished ones. I have a surplus of those right now, too. Great work

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"Don't cry because it's over. SMILE because it happened."
-Dr. Seuss
:iconfriskyryski:
Thank you very much! I really appeciated all your comments and favorites. It is good to finish the pieces we started and just left lying around. Good luck with yours!

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Rykki
:icondixie26:
you're very welcome. and thank you.

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"Don't cry because it's over. SMILE because it happened."
-Dr. Seuss

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