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Sticky Note Impasse by ~friskyryski:iconfriskyryski:



he loved over calendars but under planes
as she made lists and wrote his name
on sticky notes put everywhere
there was an empty place

to write the words of half-hatched
plans and aging thoughts, she kept
his love like a leisure boat left out
in all the kinds of weather

and they both cursed at it, staining
wood again but each
a different color, to clash
upon the double meeting

reminding him of Solomon,
but she refused to give it up
or cut it down and scribbled
down the lists instead

of ways to lose yourself
between calendars and planes,
too fond of the adhesive
but needing the desk-space
©2008-2009 ~friskyryski
:iconfriskyryski:

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:iconaquapheonix:
Pretty good!

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I walk around in circles
while I just happen to turn and see
My obssession and my true love
Sweetly leaning in to kiss me
:iconteenagejesus:
this is cute. that's the first word that popped into my head. it's a compliment.

"she kept
his love like a leisure boat left out
in all the kinds of weather"
great line!

-jeez

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need some hell.
:iconspamuel:
I like the idea -- people plan great things and never get round to doing them -- its something we're all guilty of im sure :D

--
The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on; nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears blot out a Word of it.
:iconfriskyryski:
For sure. Thanks for the comment.

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Rykki
:iconsassaputzin:
ok im working my way through them now....again this is a brilliant piece of writing (i know you lot over there spell differently to us do you spell aging like that, we spell ageing, which if you read it is more correct) but this is superb my dear...

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