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Waiting Right Here With You by ~friskyryski:iconfriskyryski:



There's something in me, belonging to you
(I can only suppose) that defies natural reactions
to your stupidity— so sometimes I return
before you know I’ve gone.

Do you ever wonder about love
they capitalize? I do. But then,
remind myself: remember,
that direction matters more
than interior luxury.

Know, you’re a journey
I would take from now on,
if only I wasn’t waiting, to go
some place more specific.

But, this bench is cold, and the bus is late.
Can I just stay with you
for a while?
©2008-2009 ~friskyryski
:iconfriskyryski:

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Simple, but heartfelt.

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:iconteenagejesus:
kind of devastating. like you're settling for this person and they're too dumb to realize. the language is really cutting and i liked that.
'But, this bench is cold, and the bus is late.'
wow! great line!

-jeez

--
need some hell.

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